How's My Driving?

[plungeintofire]

How's My Driving?

It's the end of the month, and that means it's time for ol' HMDsky to make an appearance. These will always be optional, and never anonymous. Concrit is easier to accept when it comes from somebody you know, in my humble itty bitty opinion. On that note, be kind. Suggest ways a person can improve instead of just pointing out what he or she is doing wrong, and mention what you like as well as what you don't. If you have nothing to offer but shameless praise, I doubt anyone will object.

To participate, list your name in the subject line, and the characters you'd like to receive comments/praise/concrit for.

Comments

Re: Eve

[lazygurl]

So far, so good! The trouble with kitchen sink musefests is that it's hard to see multiple facets of characters' personalities without some kind of trigger. Haven't seen Raye blow up at anybody, cause no one really actively annoys her. She's annoyed half the time, so seeing calm, collected Raye 99% of the time is strange. And Yang hasn't gotten to be sufficiently sassy since there's no human bad guy for her to punch(yet). You play them well, I think they just need more people to contrast with.

Re: Eve

[solar_flare]

She's yelled at Harry a few times, but yeah, Raye needs more people around that will frustrate and annoy her because what is patience. XD Thanks! And if you're volunteering Bison for sassy and punching... :3