How's My Driving?

[plungeintofire]

How's My Driving?

It's the end of the month, and that means it's time for ol' HMDsky to make an appearance. These will always be optional, and never anonymous. Concrit is easier to accept when it comes from somebody you know, in my humble itty bitty opinion. On that note, be kind. Suggest ways a person can improve instead of just pointing out what he or she is doing wrong, and mention what you like as well as what you don't. If you have nothing to offer but shameless praise, I doubt anyone will object.

To participate, list your name in the subject line, and the characters you'd like to receive comments/praise/concrit for.

Comments

Re: Eve

[crowning_glory]

As far as I can tell, you've still got your characters down. Though I'm not that sharp on Sailor Moon anymore since I haven't watched it in... yeeeeears. I also never watched Bleach, and am no Mega Man fan.

As far as your Yang, Kirk and Cap'n Hammer go though, they're wonderful! Lust is tricky since last I remember she got really, really burned in Brotherhood.

There's a lot I need to brush up on in terms of canons.

Cherise is also alright. It's tricky with OCs. By default people seem to expect Mary-Sue characters when people have range to make one themselves. She doesn't come off that way, so that's a good thing.

Re: Eve

[gorgeous_sin]

Aw, thank you so much! And yeah, OC's are tricky in that respect. I had to revamp her from an old game I played in and switch some things around to make her more of a person, so I'm relieved she's not coming across as a Mary Sue. Appreciate it!