How's My Driving?

[plungeintofire]

How's My Driving?

It's the end of the month, and that means it's time for ol' HMDsky to make an appearance. These will always be optional, and never anonymous. Concrit is easier to accept when it comes from somebody you know, in my humble itty bitty opinion. On that note, be kind. Suggest ways a person can improve instead of just pointing out what he or she is doing wrong, and mention what you like as well as what you don't. If you have nothing to offer but shameless praise, I doubt anyone will object.

To participate, list your name in the subject line, and the characters you'd like to receive comments/praise/concrit for.

Comments

Jordan

[lazygurl]

(too lazy for HTML)

Bison
Karina
Frollo
Smithy (unplayed)

Rusty at this sort of thing, so critique is welcome.

Re: Jordan

[solar_flare]

I can't wait to see Smithy roll out, but that's just because I love how well you've nailed your characters so far. Bison's posturing is spot on, and I cracked up laughing at Frollo's "get off my lawn" post because it was just so perfect. Karina's fantastic too, I love that you're willing to keep her flaws, and the new dialogue you've crafted for her just seems so canon. That's got to be tough to pull off, so mad respect!

As for suggestions, that's a tough one. I think you're doing a really good job as it stands. I suppose if you want to trot out your villains more often, it's usually best to plot with someone OOCly beforehand just to make sure they're okay with being ambushed or attacked. Me, I'm totally fine with it, but some other people might be all "wait no please NO PLEASE NOOOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T KILL ME I JUST GOT HERE"

Feel free to ping me any time you have questions, though!

Re: Jordan

[whos_this_bitch]

I'm only familiar with Bison and Frollo, but they are awesome. Frollo needs to sing though, hehe. I mean- I'm not sure how you could make them better, but I could always do with seeing more!

Re: Jordan

[lazygurl]

Heh, aww thank ya very much.