How's My Driving?

[plungeintofire]

How's My Driving?

It's the end of the month, and that means it's time for ol' HMDsky to make an appearance. These will always be optional, and never anonymous. Concrit is easier to accept when it comes from somebody you know, in my humble itty bitty opinion. On that note, be kind. Suggest ways a person can improve instead of just pointing out what he or she is doing wrong, and mention what you like as well as what you don't. If you have nothing to offer but shameless praise, I doubt anyone will object.

To participate, list your name in the subject line, and the characters you'd like to receive comments/praise/concrit for.

Comments

Scott

[crowning_glory]

Characters

Jaune Arc - short_n_sweet
Ice King - simon_petrikov
Milla Maxwell - crowning_glory

Vyse (yet to be played) - vyse_the_legend
Amelia Inglebert (yet to be played) - amelia_inglebert

So, how am I doing? Aside from feeling like I ought to participate/initiate more, it'd be nice to know what, if anything, I could touch up on.

Re: Scott

[gorgeous_sin]

A certain someone told me that this is actually your first time roleplaying in journal format. If this is true, I'm completely blown away, because you just seem to get it. You know how to respond to people without commanding their character's reactions while giving them plenty to respond to. Every single one of your posts, from every character, is just sheer delight. Even though I'm not familiar with Ice King outside of the clip you showed, he makes me laugh so hard. I loved his application at Harry's booth, that was fantastic. And you have no idea how hard I laughed when Jaune got rained on by a cat. omfg.

In short, you're doing everything right, and I love it. Keep it coming!

Re: Scott

[crowning_glory]

It actually is my first time doing this. It's not that different than forum role-playing however, which is something I've done before. I really do miss the days of using chat rooms to role-play. It seemed so much easier to meet new people and mingle with new groups that way. But Dreamwidth is proving to be a great alternative in the absence of chat rooms. Role-playing just isn't as popular as it used to be...

But I've been doing it for a while, and I fancy myself something of a writer. I'm glad the experience is transferring well, and I'm more than glad that you're enjoying yourself!

JaunexRaye4eva

Re: Scott

[gorgeous_sin]

I ship it even if she is much meaner than Pyrrha.

Oh yes, absolutely having a ball. Sorry for the slowness!

Re: Scott

[crowning_glory]

Oh it's alright. I know you'd tag more if you could.

[whos_this_bitch]

I'm not familiar with any of the muses apart from Ice king, so I can't really HMD them on accuracy (Sorry ^_^;;), but I like the way you play them. Every thread we've had has been awesome.

However. Ice King, I can say not only is he so, so much fun to play off, he is exactly on the money. I cannot praise you enough for him!