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Yang Xiao Long ([personal profile] solar_flare) wrote in [community profile] genessia_ooc 2013-12-22 10:52 pm (UTC)

Re: Jordan

I can't wait to see Smithy roll out, but that's just because I love how well you've nailed your characters so far. Bison's posturing is spot on, and I cracked up laughing at Frollo's "get off my lawn" post because it was just so perfect. Karina's fantastic too, I love that you're willing to keep her flaws, and the new dialogue you've crafted for her just seems so canon. That's got to be tough to pull off, so mad respect!

As for suggestions, that's a tough one. I think you're doing a really good job as it stands. I suppose if you want to trot out your villains more often, it's usually best to plot with someone OOCly beforehand just to make sure they're okay with being ambushed or attacked. Me, I'm totally fine with it, but some other people might be all "wait no please NO PLEASE NOOOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T KILL ME I JUST GOT HERE"

Feel free to ping me any time you have questions, though!

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