A certain someone told me that this is actually your first time roleplaying in journal format. If this is true, I'm completely blown away, because you just seem to get it. You know how to respond to people without commanding their character's reactions while giving them plenty to respond to. Every single one of your posts, from every character, is just sheer delight. Even though I'm not familiar with Ice King outside of the clip you showed, he makes me laugh so hard. I loved his application at Harry's booth, that was fantastic. And you have no idea how hard I laughed when Jaune got rained on by a cat. omfg.

In short, you're doing everything right, and I love it. Keep it coming!