How's My Driving?

[plungeintofire]

How's My Driving?

It's the end of the month, and that means it's time to get some feedback on your characters. These will always be optional, and never anonymous. Concrit is easier to accept when it comes from somebody you know, so please be courteous and kind. Suggest ways a person can improve instead of just pointing out what he or she is doing wrong, and mention what you like as well as what you don't. If you have nothing to offer but shameless praise, I doubt anyone will object.

To participate, list your name in the subject line, and the characters you'd like to receive comments/praise/concrit for.

Comments

Re: Critiana

[koishi_komeiji]

Thank you! :D She's a real challenge for me to write and her subtle quirks are very important I think. If ever you think there's something I can improve on or a bit of dialogue or action she performs seems a bit out of place, please tell me :D I want to make her the best Koishi i can make her.

On a sidenote you'll be pleased to know that my interpretation of Koishi was written in tandem with Kaguko's interpretation of Satori. We've both worked very hard to make their interactions zipper-tight. I'm worried that some of that may be lost in a purely longpost style but we'll figure something out.

Re: Critiana

[weavemyownfate]

I can tell she is! :O

......... that icon though.

Re: Critiana

[koishi_komeiji]

hehehe yeah. onikobe rin has some really great and caring portrayals of the komeiji sisters.

Though I believe it was eromame that started the licking thing. (warning: silly)

Re: Critiana

[weavemyownfate]

The only thing that video makes me want to do is pump up my air muscles!! >:| (i didn't know that's the artists name.. Good to know!)

Re: Critiana

[koishi_komeiji]

Keep in mind the artist's stuff isn't all sfw so keep that in mind if you intend to browse further.