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plungeintofire) wrote in
genessia_ooc2012-02-24 10:45 am
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Applications
Please note that applications are no longer necessary. You can join the game immediately by posting to the Taken Characters page, then subscribing to the main communities, and finally by adding the proper info to the Contacts page. However, if you want to use the application template as a handy reference in your character's personal journal, then by all means feel free!
Copy and paste the following into a comment on this post, fill it out, and then submit. Links to an application hosted on your DW are permitted, so long as the entry is not locked. All applications will be screened solely to the mods. Applications must be written in your own words; no links to other sites, no copying/pasting from Wikipedia or someone else's application. Plagiarism will result in immediate removal from the community.
Re: Pum-pum-pumkin-pum! I summon an application to Genessia!
The first person sample gives a really good idea that you know what she sounds like and you've got a great list of her powers. Unfortunately, you need a few more tweaks to get the rest of the application in compliance.
Personality section has a three-paragraph minimum, so you need to expand it out a bit.
Also, your history seems a bit off. The canon point you seem to be taking her from is when Asura was initially freed, not from the end of the series. So you might want to do a bit more cleanup on that.
And the prose section is a 300-word minimum, so you'll want to add more to it.
When you've finished, just resubmit and we'll take another look!
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