How's My Driving?

[plungeintofire]

How's My Driving?

It's the end of the month, and that means it's time to get some feedback on your characters. These will always be optional, and never anonymous. Concrit is easier to accept when it comes from somebody you know, so please be courteous and kind. Suggest ways a person can improve instead of just pointing out what he or she is doing wrong, and mention what you like as well as what you don't. If you have nothing to offer but shameless praise, I doubt anyone will object.

To participate, list your name in the subject line, and the characters you'd like to receive comments/praise/concrit for.

Comments

Bizzy | Spirit Albarn, Luke Triton

[notsoholyspirit]

Please let me know! Spirit is a new character for me and I'm learning... As for Luke it has been a really long time since I've played him.

Tay

[whiteas]

Weiss Schnee (RWBY) | whiteas
Yuri Nakamura (Angel Beats!) | tenminutes

Let me know what's up!

tamzin

[banishment]

Mamoru Chiba/Tuxedo Kamen, Sailor Moon (preconscious)
Prince Zuko, Avatar: the Last Airbender (banishment)

Pain

[deathsought]

Zeref | Fairy Tail | deathsought
Hagire Rinichiro | Deadman Wonderland | hemoeroticism
Clow Reed | Card Captor Sakura | reedfate
Red X | Teen Titans | umadrobin

Eve

[solar_flare]

Cherise Thompson - broken_trifecta
Chun-Li - lightningkicks
Faetan Jarl - faetan
King Hippo - couchkiller
Lust - gorgeous_sin
Orihime Inoue - leekspins
Raye Hino/Sailor Mars - flamescout
Yang Xiao Long - solar_flare

Concrit is always good, even for characters I've been playing forever. OC's too!

Amy

[beautifulmidboss]

Vyers/Midboss - Disgaea - beautifulmidboss
Zelos Wilder (Kratos Ending) - Tales of Symphonia - redsnowangel

Always useful to know how I can improve with these guys :)

Eri

[nrgsvr]

Mayu Nozaki | Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun

How accurate am I with him?

Critiana

[koishi_komeiji]

Koishi Komeiji- Touhou Project koishi_komeiji
Sakuya Izayoi- Touhou Project sakuya_izayoi
Charlotte- Madoka Magica dessert_witch

Koishi has been the most active. Haven't been able to do much with Sakuya just yet. But I will.

Timmy

[thefirstwife]

Lucifer/Kira Sakuya | beareroflight
Azula | luckymonster
Temari | tessenjounin
Jisho | jisho
Kurenai | scarletrose
Gabriel | immortaltrickster
Lilith (NEW) | thefirstwife
Duzell | vampirebrat
Leviathan | darknpc
Usagi Tsukino / Sailor Moon | queenofnight
Kaname Kuran | primumsanguis


That's it. I'm still amazed I have the usernames memorized XD. Please let me know what you think. You can always go to each respective journals to give your concrit.

Re: Timmy

[leekspins]

I think your characters and roleplay in general are fantastic. Granted, I may not be familiar with all of these fandoms, but I adore how willing you are to go out there and take the initiative. You've created a lot of fun plots for everyone in the game, serious and light-hearted both, and that makes my job so much easier. ♥ You're friendly and an absolute delight, so I'm very glad that you joined this game. Thank you for all the wonderful CR and twisted plots!