How's My Driving?

[plungeintofire]

How's My Driving?

It's the end of the month, and that means it's time to get some feedback on your characters. These will always be optional, and never anonymous. Concrit is easier to accept when it comes from somebody you know, so please be courteous and kind. Suggest ways a person can improve instead of just pointing out what he or she is doing wrong, and mention what you like as well as what you don't. If you have nothing to offer but shameless praise, I doubt anyone will object.

To participate, list your name in the subject line, and the characters you'd like to receive comments/praise/concrit for.

Comments

Pain

[deathsought]

Zeref | Fairy Tail | deathsought
Hagire Rinichiro | Deadman Wonderland | hemoeroticism

I'm trying to be more active with Hagire. D: I know he hasn't been doing as much as he should be.

Re: Pain

[weavemyownfate]

I have to say, during our CR all I could think was 'Wow, Zeref seems pretty miserable'. And then I looked at the wiki you linked and could see why.

In fact everything in there and in our CR matched up really well IMO, so really all I can say is great work!