Thank you for your application! While most of the application was good, there were a few areas that we would like to see improved upon. The personality is very sparse, for example, and we would like to see greater detail and expansion on what makes this character tick, and how she behaves in general and around others. Please be as thorough as possible! Additionally, please expand upon the powers section. Be sure to include the extent of the each power and its limitations, particularly if a certain power would need player consent to be utilized.

Please review and revise, then resubmit it to us at your earliest convenience. Thank you!