If you'd like to play Blair, you're going to need do some editing, I'm afraid!
The first person sample gives a really good idea that you know what she sounds like and you've got a great list of her powers. Unfortunately, you need a few more tweaks to get the rest of the application in compliance.
Personality section has a three-paragraph minimum, so you need to expand it out a bit.
Also, your history seems a bit off. The canon point you seem to be taking her from is when Asura was initially freed, not from the end of the series. So you might want to do a bit more cleanup on that.
And the prose section is a 300-word minimum, so you'll want to add more to it.
When you've finished, just resubmit and we'll take another look!
Re: Pum-pum-pumkin-pum! I summon an application to Genessia!
The first person sample gives a really good idea that you know what she sounds like and you've got a great list of her powers. Unfortunately, you need a few more tweaks to get the rest of the application in compliance.
Personality section has a three-paragraph minimum, so you need to expand it out a bit.
Also, your history seems a bit off. The canon point you seem to be taking her from is when Asura was initially freed, not from the end of the series. So you might want to do a bit more cleanup on that.
And the prose section is a 300-word minimum, so you'll want to add more to it.
When you've finished, just resubmit and we'll take another look!