How's My Driving?

It's the end of the month, and that means it's time to get some feedback on your characters. These will always be optional, and never anonymous. Concrit is easier to accept when it comes from somebody you know, so please be courteous and kind. Suggest ways a person can improve instead of just pointing out what he or she is doing wrong, and mention what you like as well as what you don't. If you have nothing to offer but shameless praise, I doubt anyone will object.

To participate, list your name in the subject line, and the characters you'd like to receive comments/praise/concrit for.

Hello all, Melon here. I was here for a short, short bit of time with another muse but lost her rather quickly. Now I'm back with another. :)

This is Maria Renard, hailing from Castlevania just after Symphony of the Night. You're welcome to read her info post as well as my head canon post. I'll be glad to answer any questions too. :)

And feel free to add me on plurk @ iamthemurderer.

Dave here! The player of Sun Wukong (monkeystowaway) and Grimmjow (grindpantera). I'm bringing in a villain!

This is Uva from Kamen Rider OOO. Uva looks human, but that isn't his real form. He's a thing called a Greeed. He is the rest of the Greeed were created by Alchemist. He hungers endlessly because there is a void in him that can't be filled. His senses are diminish on non-existent. Like colors being muted, sound not sounding quite like it should. He can't even taste things, despite this he still chugs alcohol like water.

His human form is maintained by medals harvested from human desire. How they do this is by making a coin slot appear and inserting a coin into a human to create a monster made from their desire. Like say if a person wanted to have the best restaurant in town packed with people, the monster might go around attacking and destroying other restaurants so people have no choice but to go there.

And he'll be needing more medals here, so expect monster attacks in the cities. He's going to still try to keep a low profile though.

So yeah. New villain and future monster attacks. Feel free to hit me up or add me on plurk. Mine is afakeimage.